2011年3月2日 星期三
The Premonitnion
Linda Hanson was a mother who lived in delight with her successful husband and two lovely daughters. Everything seemed so good until one day when the police came up to her door and told her a deperating news --- her husband, Jim, died in a car accident. That was the toughest day she had ever had. The next day, however, when she woke up with depress in bed, Jim was miracly lying beside her safe and sound. All filled her mind was happiness. She regarded what had happened yesterday as nothing but a dream. Nevertheless, what buried deeply in her mind was a great doubt. The day passed soon. She felt something was wrong when she woke up the next morning. Jim was not there; instead, her mother and sister were dressed in black, seated in the sofa in the living room. Linda was compeletly confused about the scene that she was facing with. Her mother tried to appease her while noticing that Linda was frightened. She could not believe that her husband had died AGAIN. Linda's mother introduced her to a psychiatrist because she became hysterical. After one day, Jim came back to life again. But he was gone the next day. Against the misery, Linda commenced to figure out what was exactly happening to her and her family. She made a calendar and found that the order of her all week was messy. That is why her husband would revive and die during those days. Eventually, she found that it was herself that killed Jim by accident. Though Jim was dead, Linda knew how much her husband loved her before the car accident. What Jim left were not only two adorable daughters but also a new life in Linda's belly.
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deperating....desperate?
回覆刪除好奇妙哦XD
not bad
回覆刪除good!!!!
回覆刪除同學 你超過150個字了喔 要扣分扣分扣分!!!
回覆刪除try to rewrite these:
回覆刪除1. miracly
2. All filled her mind was happiness.
Thanks for listening.
回覆刪除very good,
回覆刪除a deperating news 不可數吧!!
回覆刪除Jim was not there; instead, her mother and sister were dressed in black, seated in the sofa in the living room
分辭構句 棒!!
She could not believe that her husband had died AGAIN
印想中 die不是不能用完成式
有水準喔!
老實說 找不太到問題-.-"
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