2011年6月9日 星期四

Discussing an Effect - 1

     Opening a large factory in Acton might have some bad effects.  First, there would be pollution of noise, water and air.  The factory would release exhaust fume and waste water so that people in Acton might get sick easily.  Besides, as the population increases, the enthusiasm may fade consequently.  Old people, who have spent their all life in Acton would not like to end up in a place where they do not know anymore.  Last but not the least, when a factory is opened, lots of trees would be felled down.  Hence, wild animals would lose their homes.  To sum up, entrepreneurs should not destroy a beautiful small town just for their own profit or they might spoil what is more precious.

5 則留言:

  1. release exhaust fume ?? 為什麼要連用兩個排出?

    very good!

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  2. 排放廢水應該跟生病沒有直接關係ㄅ
    現在我們住的城市也都排放廢水
    我們還不是活的好好的

    就還是很有說服力

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  3. 排放廢水明明就有直接關係!

    很棒哦:D

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