2011年4月13日 星期三
Describing a person
I have a friend who has been missing for two days. I am hoping that somebody can help me find him. It was at the airport where I found him missing. His name is Philip. Here are some features of him. He has blond short hair and is of average build. His eyes are big and blue and he doesn't wear glasses. He is about 6 feet tall and weighs 170 pounds. Also, he has broad shoulders. There are some tattoos on his arms and neck. When he got lost, he was wearing a red shirt and black pants. He can't speak good English. If anyone have ever seen him, please contact me as soon as possible. This is my cellphone number:0945545454. Thank you very much.
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hoping->hopping
回覆刪除speak good English 改influent或是在後面+well好像比較順眼一點
樓上說的hoping->hopping
回覆刪除其實hoping是對的哦
He can't speak good English....He can't speak English well. 也許比較好哦
雖然你可能是要說speak good English 是說一口流利的英文?^^
It was at the airport where I found him missing
回覆刪除where應該換成that吧 強調句型
還是一樣沒什麼錯誤
but I called the phone, and no one replied
特徵敘述的很有條理
回覆刪除還不錯