2011年4月13日 星期三

Describing a person

I have a friend who has been missing for two days. I am hoping that somebody can help me find him. It was at the airport where I found him missing. His name is Philip. Here are some features of him. He has blond short hair and is of average build. His eyes are big and blue and he doesn't wear glasses. He is about 6 feet tall and weighs 170 pounds. Also, he has broad shoulders. There are some tattoos on his arms and neck. When he got lost, he was wearing a red shirt and black pants. He can't speak good English. If anyone have ever seen him, please contact me as soon as possible. This is my cellphone number:0945545454. Thank you very much.

4 則留言:

  1. hoping->hopping
    speak good English 改influent或是在後面+well好像比較順眼一點

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  2. 樓上說的hoping->hopping
    其實hoping是對的哦

    He can't speak good English....He can't speak English well. 也許比較好哦
    雖然你可能是要說speak good English 是說一口流利的英文?^^

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  3. It was at the airport where I found him missing
    where應該換成that吧 強調句型

    還是一樣沒什麼錯誤

    but I called the phone, and no one replied

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  4. 特徵敘述的很有條理
    還不錯

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