I’ve made a decision of quitting my job in a restaurant. Firstly, the pay is so low that I cannot make ends meet. I always spend all my money just after I get my pay. Another reason is that I am taking the University Exam in about 10 months. Having a job might be a distraction while I am preparing for the exam. Most importantly, my body is getting worse owing to the job. Every time, after I finished my work, I feel so exhausted that I cannot even focus on anything. Day after day, I finally found that my body was not in good condition as it used to be. Due to these reasons, I’ve decided to quit my current job and reschedule my life.
very good 理由很清楚而且有舉例
回覆刪除Firstly, the pay is so low that I cannot make ends meet. I always spend all my money just after I get my pay.
感覺後面那句沒有說明到前面那句
照後面那句講的 薪水高也是會花光
感覺說明一下花在哪裡比較好
第一句的理由奇怪喔
回覆刪除如果是自己會花光 你賺再多還是不能收支平衡
Every time, after I finished my work, I feel so exhausted that I cannot even focus on anything 前後時態不一致
很清楚阿
回覆刪除一目了然
good!
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