Contrasting - 2 (revised)

  Two people, Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines, want to apply for a job as a English instructor.  Comparing their résumés, I would like to hire Lynn Whitnall.  The first reason is that Lynn masters more languages, such as Spanish, French and Japanese, than Debra does.  Moreover, Lynn has more teaching experience.  Lynn has been a teacher since 1997.  However, Debra had been a teacher for only 5 years.  Besides, Lynn got a teaching award in 2004 while Debra published an English book in 2006.  In conclusion, I think experience is the most important requirement for a teacher.  Consequently, I would certainly hire Lynn rather than Debra.